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clearly this isn't the most impressive flash. amateur drawings, basic, cliche premise, etc. but i will say you have a decent understanding of shadow, perspective, and overall camera work which the average animator trying to make a flash like this shows no knowledge of. so uh, its decent. the flash could still stand to be improved in, well, everything. but youve got something to start on. right now it seems more like an outline for an actual decent flash. (besides the lack of plot that is.)
keep trying.
Author's Response:
ok I will try to improve, its one of my first animations so understand
thnks
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"You really pulled it off... for the most part."
As soon as the main menu, you really established what you seemed to be going for, and I was practically sold already. It definitely has that artsy-fartsy look as you call it, which i totally dug right away. But when I actually watched it, I kind of went back and forth with my opinion, because some parts really stuck to that original idea, and nailed it, while others (ahem, turtleco) kinda killed the mood for me. Especially that thing with the xbox 360... way too.. i dunno materialistic and light hearted i guess. totally lacked the weird, the creepy, the trippy, or the artsy qualities of most of the other parts. i guess you cant really get around the way styles are going to vary in a collab, but having them at least be on the same page is pretty important to me. so i give you a big fat 5 for most of the collab, but a 2 for the inconsistent parts. so thats more or less a 4 overall. aka an 8/10.
Author's Response:
I agree with that for the most part, but I though it was cool having everything so different.
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I like it. Mostly. Taking a comedic turn on an already pretty absurd (if strangely addictive) show is a good concept to start with. However, you made one fatal mistake: your portrayal of house. while you got the other characters down fairly well (in a comedic way), your house doesnt look anywhere near him, doesnt sound even close to him, and, perhaps most sadly at all, at no points takes advantage of the brooding and mysterious side of house that could be a comedy goldmine. your house is just far too upbeat, fix that and the humor value will go way up.
also, you need a preloader. it just aint right without one.
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